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MY FIRST ARTICLE // INTERVIEW WITH CRAFTY PROMOTER - ALL ROUND LEGEND LEFTY AKA DAVE THE ELF INSIDE //
CLICK ME FOR LINK TO ARTICLE

Hope you dont think my punctuation is too awful, i am northern remember :p
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
Awww my baby can write!

I'm going to hit you with an apostrophe tho :P

well done babe xxxx
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
thanks babe, i'll look forward to my apostrophe beating :p xxx
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
Andy-Rise said:
Hope you dont think my punctuation is too awful,
Great Article Andy, informative and I've learnt something new today. ;)

Beat you to it Sue, lol...
Hey, I'm a northerner (well east mids), to be honest, your punctuation is not so good.
Only read the first couple of paragraphs and... Sentence is too long, you definately need a comma or full-stop in there.

My tip, try and read out aloud what you've written, if you pause or take a breath you require a comma or full-stop.

"...Crafty and Crank and the concepts..." would have read better as "...Crafty, Crank and the concepts..."


Really depends how serious you are on the punctuation and grammar of an article. Funny really, I was reading a conversation about poor grammar on DSI, lol...
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
thanks mate, glad ya liked it

im not too fussed about the grammar being perfect, just wanted the elf to spread the word on next weeks party really :)
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
Definately spreading, lol. I've been writing documents for over 20yrs, so I pick on grammar and punctuation quite quickly, force of habit.

Crafty... Pity it conflicts with Magnetix' 1st b'day, I might pop in on my way down to Brixton.
Brum's is steadily becoming one of my fav' clubbin' spots.

Be good to hear you at Frantic 11, you were wicked at Puzzle Project (Apr), I was going to use the train but they don't leave London until 20:00 on Mon!!! So, I'm having to drive.

I'll be looking for some great poses from you and Matt, lol...
pic below: still one of my favs...


See ya Sun
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
Dr-Dax said:
Brum's is steadily becoming one of my fav' clubbin' spots

Brum is :P

hehe sorry
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
Lol
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Posted Fri 22 Aug
priceless :p
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Posted Fri 22 Aug

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